Tanka 15,16 Mind-Body Poem by Savita Tyagi

Tanka 15,16 Mind-Body



One Pointedness

Blessed is the mind
That moves across galaxies yet
To its point of light
Sole in its mortal body
Stays so blissfully aligned.


Robert Murray Smith's comment gave me the inspiration to write it in following way.
It depicts mind's another characteristic.

Tanka 16

Alertness.

Perplexes this mind
That moves across galaxies yet
To billion neurons
Lodged in its mortal body
Stays so blissfully aligned!


11.12.2017

Sunday, November 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: harmony,meditation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Being inspired by Robert Murray Smith you have inscribed a beautiful poem on harmony and meditation.It may be quoted........ Perplexes this mind That moves across galaxies yet To billion neurons Lodged in its mortal body Stays so blissfully aligned! Thanks for sharing.

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