Tanka - 16 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - 16

Rating: 5.0


wear this mask daily
white powder and painted lips
softness in your eyes
nothing to embrace further
wash every night by moonlight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 04 September 2016

Stunning write, I love the imagery a sense of mystique and brilliant choice of words!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Painted lips! ! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2016

Beautiful. Loved the last two lines.

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