Tanka - 16 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - 16

Rating: 5.0


wear this mask daily
white powder and painted lips
softness in your eyes
nothing to embrace further
wash every night by moonlight

Tuesday, August 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lips
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 04 September 2016

Stunning write, I love the imagery a sense of mystique and brilliant choice of words!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Painted lips! ! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2016

Beautiful. Loved the last two lines.

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