Tanka: Can Time Be Frozen? Poem by David Wood

Tanka: Can Time Be Frozen?

Rating: 5.0


Yes, you can freeze time
Because it stops completely
When you can't see her
And passes in a second
Every time you do see her!

Sunday, November 27, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Japanese poem, a Tanka (meaning short song in Japanese) is just a big Haiku with 5 lines of 5,7,5,7,7 syllables. And yes, time does drag....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 03 December 2022

Such a great Tanka, David! And such a great tribute to eternal love!

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Nosheen Irfan 28 November 2022

Such brilliant piece! Ingenious idea and effortless execution.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 November 2022

A brilliant tribute to Tina I'm sorry for making you cry but I thought of her she was lucky

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David Wood 28 November 2022

You got the initial T right though……..

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David Wood 28 November 2022

Sorry, LeeAnn, it's not for Tina……

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Jayne Louise Davies 27 November 2022

A good write David! Wrote my first one earlier on, it's on here called Love x

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