(tanka) False Awakenings Poem by Bill Galvin

(tanka) False Awakenings

Rating: 4.5


I think that I woke,
And wrote what I was dreaming…
Poet's verse streaming;
Or, dreamt that I was writing…
My words there in the morning.

7-10-2016 (about the Hypnopompic State;
Sometimes called False Awakening;
3 perfect haikus and senryus I found on paper)

Sunday, July 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 July 2016

If only I could write in such a state- -it would be like adding hours to a 24 hour day. Again, excellent.

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Kelly Kurt 10 July 2016

I seem to be inspired by the hypnogogic state, but I completely relate with this excellent Tanka

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Bill Galvin 10 July 2016

Thanks, Kelly... both states are strangely fascinating.

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