Tanka ~ Rose Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Rose

Rating: 5.0


as she gazed those eyes
it reflected emptiness
like thorns piercing heart
taking the blood away from
to the rose to make it red

Saturday, August 7, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,red,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta S 07 August 2021

Excellent Tanka....from eyes to the red rose it said everything.

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Zumas Millamo 09 August 2021

Wonderful Tanka, just brilliant.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 August 2021

taking the blood away from.the heart to the rose to make it red, wonderfully said,5 Stars!

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2021

Excellent imagination....5*****

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Zoyza Da Vinka 07 August 2021

Wow so well written poem/tanka.

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Juhaina Tumlu 07 August 2021

Brilliant Tanka! ! ! Nice philosophical.

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