Tanka - Selfish Desires Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Selfish Desires

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trees stand tall and strong
guardians of the earth's soul
providing us life
yet we cut them down with ease
for our own selfish desires

Tuesday, April 2, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

Besides, not getting what we want may cause more hardship than getting what we want! ! Do you live in a building made without any wood? I doubt it. etc.

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

More or less, I believe it is only 'selfish' when our desires impose undue hardships on others. But, we may not realize we are creating hardships.

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Deepak S S 02 April 2024

Selfish in Chief. GR8 tanka.

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Sheeya Hacks 02 April 2024

And we keep destroying so many things in the process to prosper and live King Size Life...Don't We!

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

I 'take exception to' *** using 'selfish' in the title. *** 'This idiom, first recorded in 1542, uses exception in the sense of "objection, " a meaning obsolete except in a few phrases.'

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

(continued) .. *** 'Capitalize and capitalise are both English terms.' 'S' is used instead of 'z' in some words, generally in U.K. & some countries influenced by 'the British'.

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

*Hopefully I've also give readers something(s) to think about! ! And I grew up learning to capitalize/capitalise *** our planet Earth's name. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

Well, you've given readers something to think about. Some people 'make a living' from tree farming and harvesting and supplying wood & wood products. Wood IS a 'renewable resource' unlike metal and plastic.

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2024

I planting 'replacement trees', as seedlings, is 'nice', but that is also done often, I think, by people who, for pleasure &/or profit want future trees.

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