Broken pieces of
Cold emotions are sinking
In deep salty sea
Of my measureless blue tears,
As this heart is a shipwreck.
Fantastic imagery and comparison. Cold emotions sinking in deep salty sea of tears while the heart is a shipwreck. Overflow of emotions too is genuine. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Sinking of cold emotions in deep salty sea of...... tears 'As this heart is a shipwreck'. This is indeed a wonderful poem which feels like a soft flow of morning breeze. Thanks.
Cold emotions are sinking in broken pieces. Very amazing sharing definitely. Cleaver and neat composition shared....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The salty sea, sinking pieces of wreck, measureless tears..... all these are such suggestive images giving a glimpse into the disturbed and violently shattered heart ! Great Tanka!