Tanka - Stay Poem by Eddie Roa

Tanka - Stay

Rating: 5.0


Can you stay longer?
At least until the rain stops
My bed is still warm
With your smoldering kiss
And your scorching embrace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janua Catt Alonzo 09 February 2009

this is mostly what we want to say... STAY..... xoxo jan

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Eddie Roa 13 January 2009

Thanks for the encouraging words, Rachel and Dorothy.

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Rachel The Hair Guru 13 January 2009

Very nice...vivid imagery.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 12 January 2009

I feel the yearning a poem like this provokes....lovely! 10!

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Ency Bearis 11 January 2009

very inviting..short with meaning...

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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