Tanka ~ This Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ This Life

Rating: 4.5


This life…
from the edge
of a mountain
slowly slipping through
and sliding down the rocks,
to form a lake.

Sunday, January 2, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Creativity thy birth is like a water drops that slips down a mountain to form a vast river

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Nabakishore Dash 03 January 2022

exquisite philosophy.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 02 January 2022

Class tanka.

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David Wood 02 January 2022

Water is so soft yet it wears rocks away! !

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