Tasting Your Words Poem by monica monet

Tasting Your Words

Rating: 5.0


Savouring your poems
is like eating icecream with shrapnel,
and screaming as you die deliciously,
wondering not caring how you arrived,
agonized but detached,
yearning for honey
without the pollen of distress.

Touching your writings
is like echoes of distant pain
esconsed in chapters of past wastage
thought erudite then gossamer thin
seeing the heart pulped to a mess.

Tasting your words
brings hope to my life
through inversion of what's said
Seeing through the cracks
past carnage of broken dreams
to gold, pure joy,
trapped beyond millieu of stress

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2009

This one already carries such a good comments that i'm running out of space.. Let me vote..... hey, i guess there's a bit problem with the page. A zero is missing from the 10..

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Eyan Desir 30 October 2009

Fine poem..nice lines

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Blue Eyes 30 October 2009

wow! very good poem.keep up the good work.

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