Joy Of Love (Love Poem) Poem by monica monet

Joy Of Love (Love Poem)

Rating: 5.0


A moment’s peace from journeys long
A fullness ripe complete

Bewilderment as joy unfolds
How my heart does beat

Awakening from deepest sleep
A morning pure I greet

And everything I see is good
As I walk down the street

The sun is stroking yonder trees
And flowers rise to greet

A dawn like every other morn
For me it is replete

With tingling laughter welling up
Unbidden flowing sweet

A heart once lost is free at last
As I my love may meet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Starfire 07 November 2009

very nice. The computer won't let me say just very nice though, so I also like that the rhymes are unstrained and fairly original.

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Dev Poet 23 November 2009

Cute. I like your way of words

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John Knight 26 March 2010

Hi Monica - nice love poem - I like the structure with each last line preserving the rhyme. It gives real flow and rhythm. The words you use in the first line are lovely - Peace - joy - Awake - Good - Sun - Dawn - Tingling laughter - Free heart. The second lines amplify these feelings 'A heart once lost is free at last - As I my love may meet'. This is a mega love poem.- thanks for sharing. Lov in poetry - JOHN.

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 24 January 2010

a modern poet with great sense of rhyming

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george george 02 December 2009

Nice expression of the hope that comes with new love! This line especially got me: The sun is stroking yonder trees And flowers rise to greet Very very good!

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Merna Ibrahim 27 November 2009

Lovely and romantic poem. good job! I hope you visit my poetry section...Merna

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Asim Bandyopadhyay 27 November 2009

Beautiful. I love to read this poem.

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