monica monet


Release - Poem by monica monet

Stroppy stamping feet
ego driven drives
Fractious empty
clashing sound

Self-determination
winks, seducing
mind and heart
on shaky ground

Leave off this path
its not my will
but God's I seek
Release I've found


Comments about Release by monica monet

  • (1/5/2010 4:10:00 AM)


    its really a sweet poem with rich idea and enough meaningful..well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • (12/22/2009 5:23:00 AM)


    I am lucky to have read and commented on it first. This is such a beautiful rhythmic prayer like poem, that one can't help admiring it...the last stanza thrilled me.... Three stanzas all belong to and describe a part of journey finally leading to the relaease or Nirvana as we call it.....thanks 4 sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009



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