monica monet

Release - Poem by monica monet

Stroppy stamping feet
ego driven drives
Fractious empty
clashing sound

winks, seducing
mind and heart
on shaky ground

Leave off this path
its not my will
but God's I seek
Release I've found

Comments about Release by monica monet

  • (1/5/2010 4:10:00 AM)

    its really a sweet poem with rich idea and enough meaningful..well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • (12/22/2009 5:23:00 AM)

    I am lucky to have read and commented on it first. This is such a beautiful rhythmic prayer like poem, that one can't help admiring it...the last stanza thrilled me.... Three stanzas all belong to and describe a part of journey finally leading to the relaease or Nirvana as we call it.....thanks 4 sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 22, 2009

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