Stroppy stamping feet
ego driven drives
Fractious empty
clashing sound
Self-determination
winks, seducing
mind and heart
on shaky ground
Leave off this path
its not my will
but God's I seek
Release I've found
I am lucky to have read and commented on it first. This is such a beautiful rhythmic prayer like poem, that one can't help admiring it...the last stanza thrilled me.... Three stanzas all belong to and describe a part of journey finally leading to the relaease or Nirvana as we call it.....thanks 4 sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its really a sweet poem with rich idea and enough meaningful..well done 10/10