Love Transcends Poem by monica monet

Love Transcends

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LOVE TRANSCENDS
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The truth survives
all interplay
Apart from words
that shackle souls

Love transcends
the form that binds
Ignores the crowd
defies its laws

Beyond the fear
the pain the grief
Stifled in
society’s norms

A joy is shared
liberty’s flight
Freedom’s gift
united soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
george george 02 December 2009

The truth survives all interplay Apart from words that shackle souls Fantastic opening to a poem with a lot of truth to it. Pleasure to read!

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Nikunj Sharma 23 November 2009

Monica, Some of the phrases sparkle here in this poem, that is meaningful and deep, loaded with truth of love and truth itself. 1. words that shackle souls: I am amazed at the simplicity of the opening...truth survives...wow Love transcends the form that binds: on ehas to believe in love and see the forms that emerge once you feel and flow with it.... 3. Beyond the fear.... the traditional rules, forms, frames are are worthless..as love can reach far beyond..... 4. A joy is shared...united soul - It is important to know the final impact of any form of love, be it platonic love, be it the love with himself or the greater self for that matter...the focus and feeling of being united with onself is simply great.... this poem rocks as much as you do... wow is the word

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Dev Poet 23 November 2009

I like it was kinda nice. Good job ;)

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