Razor sharp tears
They shed
As the pain and sorrow cast away
We see them fall
Through pain and joy
Like the sea that flows every now and then
A beautiful poem on tears with brand new fresh image. Well balanced and well worded. Keep writing, Allison. You will be a good doctor and a wonderful poet as well. This little poem by a little girl deserves full marks i.e 10/10. Best Wishes Naseer
Thank you for sharing. Your poems have an emotional aspect which I like too much. I too wrote some lines on tears and here they are............. Tears... silent tears rolling down the cheeks. When heart is broken Anxiety touches its peak. Tears can heal the deepest wound Vitalize the shredded soul. To mitigate the distress & pain They play a vital role.
And because of these tears uv have expressed finely these emotions..poignant write
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
pssst.. Keep writing sis ah.. inspiring ka sobra :))