Tears In Rain Poem by Miss Grace

Tears In Rain

Rating: 5.0


I wish l could show you
how much it pains,
But you cannot see
my tears in the rains.

I cannot show
you my tears,
Nor l can expain to you
about my fears.

I can just cry expressing
my emotions to you,
My feelings of sadness
are true.

I don't know if
I was wrong or right,
But I do not have
the strength to fight.

Today in tears
I shred my pain,
But you cannot see
my tears in rain……..

Friday, May 20, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,painful,tears
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Words sometimes fail to make you understand the pain the heart undergoes. Only tears can explain it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The ease with which the poet has dieted to the rhyme scheme is admirable. Great work.

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The pangs of separation are so real and searing, only the heart that suffers through, can understand. The hurt is stinging. Good emotional writing. Top score and onto Myfavourites

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