Juan Olivarez

Silver Star - 3,895 Points (september 12 / nyssa oregon)

Tears Of A Cloud - Poem by Juan Olivarez

The tears of a cloud,
Fell on my face.
Leaving very little doubt,
That she felt out of place.

But they were the sweetest tears,
Those tears that fell on me.
Aleviating all my fears,
As she floated in the sky so free.

And she flew away after a while,
Following her kind.
Her tears of sorrow sweet and mild,
What I had sought to find.

Tears of sorrow turned around,
To happiness it seems.
When they brought to life the arid ground,
Making the Earth, a land of dreams.

4/5/12 Alton Texas


Comments about Tears Of A Cloud by Juan Olivarez

  • Valerie Dohren (4/9/2012 12:52:00 PM)


    A lovely poem, very well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Heather Wilson (4/9/2012 5:47:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem, it says it all, with such a nice flow., (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2012 6:03:00 PM)


    Such a positive way of seeing the rain fall. It's great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 5, 2012



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