Tears Of An Insane Lover Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Tears Of An Insane Lover

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May be earthquake, floods or typhoon
Fragile is the memoir and may collapse
My heart missing you in the rainy noon
Though broken into pieces but no lapse
I see in remembering someone I loved
Am I her beloved or she is my beloved?

Is it my love for her making me restless?
Or it's her love that makes me insane
A broken heart, dead and senseless!
How every piece has been turned in a fane?
May be my love if she came in a thought
It's her true worship, tears that brought!

The years old photograph is now dim and pale
Accidentally I had a look and I became so sad
Still your sweet fragrance I could feel and inhale
The same teen aged boy naughty and mad
Loved showers in romantic rainy noons
Never cared if mud made them cartoons!

Tears Of An Insane Lover
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 October 2017

How every piece has been turned in a fane? .............how about using into a fane. fane. a 'new word' for me. fane fān/ nounarchaic noun: fane; plural noun: fanes a temple or shrine. ============================= favorite lines: The years old photograph is now dim and pale Accidently I had a look and I became so sad Still your sweet fragrance I could feel and inhale The same teen aged boy naughty and mad I didn’t notice the misspelling ‘accidently’ [sic] at first. The computer underlined it in red. You spelled it the way I pronounce it, but it is spelled “accidentally”. No red line; good! ;) There have been a few times in my life that I’ve smelled a fragrance which reminded me of a woman I once sort-of-loved and enjoyed being around. Jasmine? Lavender? It was nice to recall the past. A nice poem of a “lost? love”. Is it a true story from your past, I wonder. Hmmm? Or is it a ‘made-up’ story? ? Bri :) p.s. i think you 'want' memory, not memoir. here in U.S. i use memory. mem·oir ˈmemˌwär/ noun noun: memoir; plural noun: memoirs 1. a historical account or biography written from personal knowledge or special sources. in 1924 she published a short memoir of her husband synonyms: account, history, record, chronicle, narrative, story, portrayal, depiction, sketch, portrait, profile, biography, monograph More a touching memoir of her childhood autobiography, life story, memories, recollections, reminiscences; journal, diary he published his memoirs in 1955 an autobiography or a written account of one's memory of certain events or people. 2. an essay on a learned subject. an important memoir on Carboniferous crustacea to MyPoemList. and if there was a PhotoList, the photo would also be sent.

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 August 2017

Memories of romance in a rainy day, a nice poem.

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Valsa George 22 August 2017

Memories of good old days and of the fleeting romance of youthful times! A very passionate write!

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