Tears Of Regret Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Tears Of Regret

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'Ungracefully I came into your arms, my mother,
Having lost a garden where I learned what is love,
Having faced an uncalled annoyance of my father,
Though I was sent to you like a wingless dove
Anyhow I managed to bring the seeds of life,
Where is she, my beloved my beautiful wife.

Without her my rage is making me violent,
I shall destroy everything if she is not found.'
'Calm my son! Be peaceful and be tolerant,
I didn't like your mutinous loud sound,
Wash with tears of regrets your darkened face,
Submission, can bring back your lost grace,

She is beyond the ocean of regrets and tears,
Go and bow your head, your father isn't unkind,
My son you'll commit many more sins, my fears!
Powerful instincts make a youth so much blind!
Your mutiny against your father, will not pay,
He is so much mighty and you're a doll of clay.'

The dejected lover made a bridge on tears of regret,
Crossed the warm oceans and his beloved he met.

Tuesday, January 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: regret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 24 July 2019

Reading your poem, brings a flood of memories of my childhood: I was a wild little child and there would always be a set of complaints against me. My father would punish me, but next day would be extra loving and kind to me, regretting that he had to punish. Many years removed, same thing with my son, and even today recalling some incidences I can't help but feel I over-reacted.

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Valsa George 18 January 2017

Parents correct us for our own good! But when young and impetuous, we are not able to take their correction and rebel against them! Later when we look back we realize that everything has been for our good! I see that you have calmed down with your prize won!

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Kelly Kurt 17 January 2017

Your writing gives me deep thoughts, and a deeper appreciation for you as a poet and man. Well done!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2017

Dejected. Thanks for sharing.

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