Ten Rambling Thoughts Poem by Chris Embrick

Ten Rambling Thoughts

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On honesty always depend
break a pledge lose a friend.

Thoughts that mend a heart broken
have no worth unless spoken.

Don't take happiness for granted
until seeds of love are planted.

Ignoring sleep, illness reap
you'll soon grow tired of counting sheep.

Never say what you're thinking to someone
who's thinking the same about you
unless you're in love.

Ignore the wife, prepare for strife
sharing together forms bonds for life.

If it's easy for others to burst your bubble
You're bound to go through life with trouble.

If an elephant steps on your foot
You're probably walking too close
If you step on an elephant's foot
You're still walking too close.

If you didn't understand the fool the first time
his second answer will be no clearer
If you're the only one who's in the room
then stay away from the mirror.

On writing Japanese poetry:
If you choka on the right words
give your mind a rest
You can tanka me later for the advice.

Thursday, June 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,humor,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2018

Seeds of love are planted for granting and living in love. Depending on honesty is definitely very interesting. Mind needs rest to be fresh. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned basing on wonderful thoughts..10

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