Alexandria Angel

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Thank You Troops - Poem by Alexandria Angel

Sacrificing everything they had,
Some comes back sad.
They lost friends and family to war,
A lot of loved ones that made their hearts tore.
Friends carried the remains of those who were buried.
They fight with everything they got,
Some never forgotten.
Guns that were held high,
Makes you want to cry for those who died.
Some had to be revived,
Thank god, they survived.
They watched their enemies disappear,
God answered their prayer.
The life they're living,
So they're country can have freedom.
They always find a way to cope;
All I want to say Is Thank You Troops

Topic(s) of this poem: soldier


Comments about Thank You Troops by Alexandria Angel

  • Aries Profanisaurus (11/11/2014 6:47:00 PM)


    A nice patriotic tribute to fallen warriors. I think you mean sacrificing rather than sacrifing. Apart from that it works (Report) Reply

    Alexandria Angel Alexandria Angel (11/12/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    Thank you for seeing a mistake and sorry for not recognizing the error. Was 15 when I wrote it.

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  • Kanav Justa (11/28/2012 11:40:00 AM)


    niicely written, , , , (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2012 12:13:00 PM)


    yes, very good theme.......... (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (8/30/2012 3:42:00 AM)


    i honestly love this theme very well done (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (8/29/2012 3:08:00 PM)


    a lovely patriotic theme...
    the underlying pain and hurt is but integral to war and guns....

    i wish there were no wars....and people could talk to each other and resolve issues...rather then kill and miame

    nice lines
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/29/2012 2:48:00 PM)


    very nerve racking and emotionally surcharged with painful demise of soldiers who faugt for their nation, wonderful gtribute (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 12, 2014


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