That Breeze Of Youth (Sonnet) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

That Breeze Of Youth (Sonnet)

Rating: 5.0


A gentle breeze is passing through our hair:
Nostalgic notes of tender melodies!
As when our hearts were young, and filled with flare:
With such joy, we were floating like the breeze…
Sweet glances were timidly imparted:
Our new love we dreamt in torrid summers:
(Fantasising fun: —not broken hearted!)
Delicious wine, love, in twilight colours…
Nowadays, those youthful times seem distant:
Those fervent feelings, —no longer beaming:
Frail for reality—inconsistent:
We were too frightened of such bold dreaming!
Every now and then, that mild breeze of youth,
Is gently caressing my heart with the truth…

Monday, November 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2019

I love reading sonnets.... the art of composing sonnet is a difficult task! You are doing it so nicely...a commedacomm job....liked and appreciated.......10/10

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Captain Cur 26 February 2020

A sonnet was a good choice to write this smooth and nostalgic poem. Soft nuanced words imparting emotion and reflective memory. A beautiful sonnet by all measures.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2019

Simply splendid sonnet, dear Ma’am Mihaela....10++

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

the breeze of youth and its virginity touches the heart of every truth!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 November 2019

Yes indeed, the sonnet reads well, it has some novel poetic expressions

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2019

Moreover, i feel the gentle breeze of this poem...fassnating expression! To MyPoemList

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