A gentle breeze is passing through our hair:
Nostalgic notes of tender melodies!
As when our hearts were young, and filled with flare:
With such joy, we were floating like the breeze…
Sweet glances were timidly imparted:
Our new love we dreamt in torrid summers:
(Fantasising fun: —not broken hearted!)
Delicious wine, love, in twilight colours…
Nowadays, those youthful times seem distant:
Those fervent feelings, —no longer beaming:
Frail for reality—inconsistent:
We were too frightened of such bold dreaming!
Every now and then, that mild breeze of youth,
Is gently caressing my heart with the truth…
A sonnet was a good choice to write this smooth and nostalgic poem. Soft nuanced words imparting emotion and reflective memory. A beautiful sonnet by all measures.
the breeze of youth and its virginity touches the heart of every truth!
Yes indeed, the sonnet reads well, it has some novel poetic expressions
Moreover, i feel the gentle breeze of this poem...fassnating expression! To MyPoemList
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love reading sonnets.... the art of composing sonnet is a difficult task! You are doing it so nicely...a commedacomm job....liked and appreciated.......10/10