love dwells
in his eyes
not on any other
vital part of
his body
as you would like
to believe
so he will love you
dearly when around
when out of sight
you are out, just out
not because he is- -
by intention- -
a cheater
as I would describe
his behavior
but because he is blind
whenever you leave him
behind
It is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression and nice collocation. Most impressive lines are.....but because he is blind whenever you leave him behind Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That kind- -probably a great % of men- -should be called self-lovers, they are true only to their own gratification and scoreboard. That is sad- -they lose out that way because their wife will leave them- -spiritually and emotionally if not physically. And if loved right, women could make men feel that heaven is on earth. Unfortunately, a larger % of women seem to be that kind of lover themselves these days. Well written poem.
That's true. I admit that this poem is just a way of picturing something the it so common. And you are right that 'if loved right' men/women will be at their very best. Thank you for commenting on this poem, Susan.