Sheldon Allen Saluta

Rookie (December 26,1991 / Davao City)

That's Why - Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

I used to love somebody
It’s always been him like nobody
Giving him all his satisfaction and prerogatives
That’s why, I’m so over protective

All of a sudden, hurts come
Fact, he loves someone, is like a bomb
Co’z all I know is he’s the center of my life but no
That’s why, I never been lay low

First hurt is like forever
Someone wants to heal mine but never
I fail to seek healing to my wounded and broken heart
That’s why, joy is always been in part

Pride is left to fend myself
Like a theft, he lets me drown in grief
He disregards my feelings and cuts my heart using knife
That’s why, I put my life in a shelf

Comments about That's Why by Sheldon Allen Saluta

  • (5/5/2010 6:00:00 PM)

    Sheldon I understand how the narrator feel when 'over protecting' someone you love (line 1) .
    The 'hurts become facts'-for sure.when it's found out that the one loved is someone else (line 5 &6) This happened to me many years ago-but I got over it and good thing I did because, there were other hurts waiting around the bend. But I was able to deal with only them because unlike the narrator, I didn't put my life in a shelf...things have a short shelf -life. I like your poem and give it a 10...but the vote does not register.
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/3/2010 10:19:00 AM)

    this poem is great and worth it! ... hey, do you know Gary Valenciano? ? ? he has a song 'That's Why'... the same title but yes, different content... also, kinda check Gloc9's 'EddieAko' if you can understand Tagalog... pleeeeeaaaase.... thanks! (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2010 9:08:00 PM)

    awwww..good write
    i hope your broken wing
    heals soon
    to fly again
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  • (5/1/2010 3:16:00 PM)

    Captures the pain painfully. Expressive write. (Report) Reply

  • (4/30/2010 9:13:00 AM)

    explaining your pain eh. (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    ur a great poet man and am jst glad to say bravo (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 8:55:00 AM)

    I know exactly how this feels. You capture the emotions very neatly and your rhymes are quite clever! =) (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2010 2:46:00 AM)

    Common genre but alluring! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 30, 2010

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