Tuesday, July 7, 2009

The Abuser Comments

Rating: 5.0

it does not matter if you're male or female
in the mind of a abuser
they will always prevail.
when you allow the abuse from the start
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louis rams
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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

an interesting verses with powerful message...remarkable poem.....10

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Heather S 09 July 2009

this poem is so very dtrong and powerful.i have been one of those people on the abused side and can fully understand this poem. thanks so much for your poems, they help me get through this life of mine

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Surya . 09 July 2009

a very interesting and deep poem. u said ir right in these words 'abuse is like a broken tool, it could damage whatever is good' voted10 surya

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a lovely subject..and you justified the write beautifully...a problem which everyone faces at some one's hand....10

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Sandra Fowler 08 July 2009

A powerful indictment of those who abuse others both physically and mentally. You are to be commended for this strong message. With admiration, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 July 2009

Very nice and important message is oven in this page by your poet heart. Very well brought out the inner essence of it. Very very nice piece.

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excellent piece.. nice message! !

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Christine Kerr 07 July 2009

This one is saved for my friends and my poem list. Louis, if your not a preacher your a physiatrist. I love how you get into the mind and make it rhyme. Excellent work. You are definitly wise from life or read a lot.10+++ (PS) I'm not digging, just enjoy analyzing.

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