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The Aim Was Song

Rating: 3.4
Before man to blow to right
The wind once blew itself untaught,
And did its loudest day and night
In any rough place where it caught.

Man came to tell it what was wrong:
It hadn't found the place to blow;
It blew too hard - the aim was song.
And listen - how it ought to go!
He took a little in his mouth,
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Patricia Vega 17 July 2018
I understand it, and I Love it.
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Sylvaonyema Uba 11 April 2018
He took a little in his mouth Nicely written Sylva
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The Grammar Nazi 27 December 2017
There is a typo on the first line of the poem; Before man to blow to right should be, Before man to blow it right. You're welcome!
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Rogelio Guillermo 09 October 2017
Such a masterful use of personification... That is what Robert Frost is great for
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 October 2017
A little through the lips and throat. The aim was song - the wind could see. Nice poem.
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Max 9/11 07 September 2016
Ya ok this poem is sHit cuZ.
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* Sunprincess * 30 August 2015
....an incredible poem with an.amazing metaphor ?
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T Rajan Evol 14 August 2015
Great work..............it makes a world of difference.
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T Rajan Evol 14 August 2015
Inspiring poetry. I always enjoy reading such poems.
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Gary Zmolek 26 March 2014
The poem is misquoted. The first line should read: Before man came to blow it right The line as typed makes no sense. Also, the original poem had every other line indented 5 spaces. It should appear that way. Hopefully this will be corrected.
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