'' The Aliens Learned That To Their Cost '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' The Aliens Learned That To Their Cost ''



After being placed here by an alien race,
As an experiment to see if we'd thrive,
Their manipulation we began to outpace,
They never believed we'd survive.

Obstacles galore they placed in our way,
They thought they could do what they please,
Storms and disasters caused us such affray,
They then inflicted all life with disease.

Over our future they had total control,
But slowly the Humans evolved,
After a period of time they took on a new role,
The alien's influence was being dissolved.

Despite all the horrors they had derived,
Life on the planet was assured,
A formidable species was what had arrived,
From alien ailment they had been cured.

How we turned out filled the aliens with regret,
But their creations froze them with fear,
They thought they could leave and just forget,
But to their rules we refused to adhere.

With a thirst for knowledge they could not contain,
For our creators we started to search,
Our quest for the truth drove them insane,
It knocked them right off their perch.

Soon Humans found them on the distant stars,
They thought this was an opportunity,
But from the outer galaxies to the planet Mars,
From their creations they had no immunity.

Interfering with nature was a total disaster,
Billions of lives had been lost,
Mother Nature alone is the only master,

‘' The Aliens Learned That To Their Cost ‘'

Friday, September 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: human brain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As we continue our search for our '' creators '' we ignore the fact we are destroying the only place we have to live, THE PLANET EARTH
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 16 September 2017

i rarely look to see who is 'online now', but today i did and found and 'explored' your site a bit; Bri Mar sounds familiar, but it's been 'a while' if i've 'talked' to you. ok, i found these two of yours in MyPoemList: 842 '' We Do Taste Nice In A Curry '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013 843 '' As Intervention Is What God's Seem To Hate '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013 i like the poem, including the story and the rhyming (though some rhymes are a bit forced perhaps) . the poem is pretty clear to me after one reading; that is one thing i really like! i'll try to remember to read it again and perhaps comment again. to MyPoemList .........for now. bri ;)

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