Thursday, September 17, 2015

The Awakening Comments

Rating: 4.5

Slowly the heart wakes from hibernation
And begins to heal and mend itself
Untold endless days and dark empty nights
Persisted through long summers and winters
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David Wood
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 September 2015

Time is a healer and its passage the treatment A timely message for all those who seek relief from all the hardships faced.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

Time has sailed its turbulent course! Leaving us to think about. Nice piece.

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Kelly Kurt 17 September 2015

A lovely sentiment, written well into verse

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M Asim Nehal 17 September 2015

Superb poem Mr. David............... Time has sailed its turbulent course the Treatment now over time now to get back in The saddle before sunset’s glow fades and Becomes caped in darkest night

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 September 2015

A great poem. I very much enjoyed reading it.

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