The Beach In The Sky Comments
The Beach In The Sky
I closed my eyes.
Felt the warmth of the sun on my face.
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A well articulated train of thought, nicely penned with spiritual insight. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jackie. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
The picture is a little bit fuzzy, but the message is clear. Well written. My name is Kim also, and I am a grandfather. Keep writing. You have talent.
Very pure and touching. Thanks for sharing your feelings through your words.
A lovely and inspirational poem, Jackie. Your sister is surely smiling. Peace
Thank you Kelly! Hopefully my sister is watching the sunset on her beach in the sky.....and smiling!
a lovely remembrance, Jackie. Thanks for sharing WELCOME at PoemHunter
Thank you Fabrizio. My sister Kim loved the beach and poetry. I have tried my best to bring them all together in my words.
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12/22/2025 10:25:57 AM # 1.0.0
I love this poem. I had a good friend (we were like sisters) die in June 2015 and she loved the beach. Actually, lots of her/my friends and family spend lots of time at the beach. This poem is beautiful and perfect. You wrote all the right words, sentences, and phrases. Bless you and keep you safe: -)
Thank you Laura. Sending lots of love and peace to you. Our " sisters" live on in our souls and dreams, always.