The Beautiful Day Poem by Koffi B Sossou

The Beautiful Day

Rating: 5.0

I woke up this morning with rays of sunlight through my window
As I was going to work,
There was no tall building to block the sunshine
The wonderful rays penetrated my skin
And there was a smile on every face I saw

As I was walking home,
The sunshine turned into beautiful clouds
And the beautiful clouds into a divine rain
And a colorless rainbow appeared in the East
And mountain Etna was covered with a pure beautiful white snow

I was in the wonderful rain playing joyfully
Just like that little kid I was before
That little kid who will be playing in the rain with a candid smile
Until being rescued by the mother
And now as I lie in my bed, I miss the sunshine, the clouds, and the rain

And more the beautiful childhood
I miss it all, the beautiful day!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2025

Filled with such heart, beauty, and wonder! .. So magnificently sketched! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Koffi B Sossou 17 March 2025

Thank you, Rebecca. There are little things that make our day, we just don't notice them sometimes.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 March 2025

Beautifully, beautifully, shared! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2024

A beautiful poem vividly depicting a wonderful day adorned with crystalline images. It resonates with me as regards childhood memories. So well crafted and expressed.

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Koffi B Sossou 10 May 2024

Thanks Rose. I wish i could go back in days to enjoy these unique moments of childhood.

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Sossou Foyovo 07 March 2024

Childhood...hmmm

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Koffi B Sossou 03 March 2024

The day was just beautiful.

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