Sunday, September 20, 2009

The Birth Comments

Rating: 5.0

he was born on a dark lonely night
and not a soul was in sight.
his mother was driving home
on that starry night, when she started
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louis rams
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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2009

A beautiful, compelling story.10/10. Kind wishes, Sandra

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dr veenaa rai 21 September 2009

birth is always divine..god holds our reins in his hands... he cares... for wonderful people like you...great...

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I loved it, my bro.. thanks for this.

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 September 2009

My friend as I always say your narration skills are really adorable.

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 September 2009

This is a great story.. Long, but worth the read. The poem did keep my interest through out.. Hey I agree with Chris! ! ! you can be a good story teller.. your stories are very interesting and well narrated 10+++ regards shan

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Christine Kerr 20 September 2009

Interesting, A good story that could turn into a great movie

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 20 September 2009

a lovely narration...kept me glued to it...a divine child born...10

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