The Blue Name Poem by Marilyn Jean

The Blue Name



Taking a too narrow lane
Where turning would not do
Nor lifting a few chains
Often meeting an inner pain
Something cold and dull grew
Heartache

Once a heavy door closed
Inside sitting still
Like a chirping bird paused
Outside when night darkened
There was no more will
Anguish

Later under the grey cover
Came hidden warm tears
Praying this would soon be over
Trying hard to feel better
Even jumping sphere
Torment

Then like waves never stop
Most joys quickly surrender
Letting hopes dry or chopped
Here follows the main offender
Its blue name like an ax drops
Despair

Sunday, July 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terrance Woolridge 09 July 2017

The pain is real, Good write

0 0 Reply
Terrance Woolridge 09 July 2017

nice write Marilyn. Thanks

0 0 Reply
Marius Poet 09 July 2017

Thanks I am exploring creative writing about emotions my long term project. I am happy you like it :)

0 0
Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2017

Tears! ! Inner pain! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

0 0 Reply
Marius Poet 09 July 2017

Many thanks for liking this poem. I am feeling creative again in the last days

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success