Needs And Fears Poem by Marilyn Jean

Needs And Fears

Rating: 4.9


I live in fears of everything
To have to leave or loose you
To have to stay seeing you forget me
To have to live without you near

I live in need of everything
To talk and smile then forget all
To know that I touched your heart
To let you know how you touched mine

I need to let you know of my fears
I love to know what are yours if any
I live waiting to cradle you gently
To let you see love here feels no fear

I fear I will never get to tell you
How much I need you and my dreams
I fear once more you will push me back
I fear your needs don't match mine

I need you to hold me when I fall
You need to know I am here if you do
I fear you think I am just another one
You need to be sure I am not, not at all

I need you to see me with my cluttered mind
I need you to never fear my loving heart
As you should never fear I'd not do the same
With all this love that is only ours

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 28 May 2017

Hold me when I fall.....a big 10++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 May 2017

I live in fears! ! Inner self. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 28 May 2017

a poem of inner thoughts trying to find a way out of a worrying mind? .............well written.

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Darlene De Beaulieu 18 January 2017

Ilkie this poem you love him and you are scard of losing him.Is what I get from your poem. I am new will write a poem soon as I pick one to type.I just joined today.

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B.m. Biswas 28 May 2017

There is a rhythm in the presentation.... a swing of the though to and from two points namely need of love and fear to lose it....... I enjoy.. Lovely. Congratulations.

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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Marius Poet 29 May 2017

Thank you all for your very kind and encouraging comments. Thanks to PH to have selected my poem for one day. I am really touched.

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Upendra Upm 29 May 2017

very brilliantly he has pursued, very diligently, his mind and fear, In such minuteness of how love inetrspearsed with fear.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 May 2017

I live in fears of everything To have to leave or lose you, Many people are living in fear these days. Nobody is safe. This is an unsecured world. Nobody is sure about the events of now and tomorrow. Congratulations! I like this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 May 2017

Living life with fear provokes thought. Living for a need of purpose amazes ind. Fears are conveyed to know. You know about feeling that tells everything here. Love is power and love does magic. Wonderful poem is shared with broad vision here...Congratulation! ...10

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