Look, the golden plate is ready set
On the round table for breakfast.
Glitters reflecting tinges of my blood
In tune with the table of mud
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A wonderful poem.....loved it. Top score and to my favourite
The offer to pongal has been so attractively portrayed here. The concluding three lines say much about it. It is a beautiful poem on nature and social affairs. Well done.
Great devotion. Man breathes in breathes out in belief. The Asthiks and the Nasthiks both. Liked the way you offered your Pongal to the deity of your worship. Good poem 10+
I agree with Dillip Top 5