Wednesday, May 7, 2008

The Breakfast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look, the golden plate is ready set
On the round table for breakfast.
Glitters reflecting tinges of my blood
In tune with the table of mud
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Indira Renganathan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 September 2022

I agree with Dillip Top 5

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 September 2022

A wonderful poem.....loved it. Top score and to my favourite

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2020

The offer to pongal has been so attractively portrayed here. The concluding three lines say much about it. It is a beautiful poem on nature and social affairs. Well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2020

Great devotion. Man breathes in breathes out in belief. The Asthiks and the Nasthiks both. Liked the way you offered your Pongal to the deity of your worship. Good poem 10+

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