You told me one night you had conquered the rift
And if I looked outside I would find your gift
So I looked outside and stared in awe
At the magnificence that before me I saw
A bridge that spanned across the sea
A bridge that you had built for just for me
A bridge that shone beautiful in the night
A bridge of silver spun silk glowing with celestial twilight
As if the spiders had spun it at your request
And the stars suspended it at your behest
Kept aloft by the stars you captured to light my way
So beautiful and luminecent I almost wanted to stay
But on the other side of this remarkable connection
Is a gem that that you have waiting for my collection
My eyes are beholding something impossible to concieve
Someone creating something so wonderous for me is hard to believe
My eyes fill with tears at the wonder my eyes behold
Stars shining reflecting off the silk in bright silver and gold
My tears shine like diamonds under the full moon
As my heart swells from your heartfelt boon
I begin my journey across the sea and stars
To find you waiting with open arms
I am lost in a moonstruck wonder a silent reverie
Pondering why such a magnificent person is deserved by me
very, very, very, very romantic poem...10 from me. i loved it.
let the bridge shine night and day may for you, forever it does stay free of dust, untouched by rust strong, to last long beyond life and lifetime.... holding its heart, hum of a timeless chime
Awe wow I really enjoyed this write so much Jen. It brought tears to my eyes. What a beautiful write. Very well expressed. keep up the great work
amazing poem! a dream, a fairly tale or just missed feeling... very bright although so blue. anyways 10+ from me
Great work for a starter, you have a great poetic imagination, keep it up, you are in the right track my friend, you got my vote, Love and Peace, Romeo
Beautiful description. Soft and smooth. Nice images. good to read.
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I would like to translate this poem
A bridge of silver spun silk glowing with celestial twilight As if the spiders had spun it at your request And the stars suspended it at your behest Kept aloft by the stars you captured to light my way.......... love yet reasons to reason by glow in heart nobody yet knows how and when it grows, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderful exposition of love by genesis, yet it is still mystery how, when and where it takes its shape of thing to come, most passionately scintillating sizzling across nature, yet utterly persuasive, ingeniously curved by the craving over the rungs of color yet by luscious glow ever attracting,10+++, thanks for sharing