Saturday, September 26, 2009

The Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

as I walked down the unlit street
I saw a candle lit in a window.
like a lighthouse, leading and guiding
the ships in the dark of night.
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louis rams
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Deborah Cromer 03 October 2009

Beautiful and full of strength. Nice focus on guiding and encouragement. Written with good choices of words to produce clear vision. Nice work. DC

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~ Jon London ~ 28 September 2009

The such an amazing calmness you get when reading this poem bro....it a loving piece to share...and I'm sure many more will agree...10++

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Sandra Fowler 27 September 2009

An extraordinary experience. No wonder you wish to pass it on. 10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 27 September 2009

Your write had created a very pleasant mood to my mind.

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Matt Mooney 27 September 2009

Words that give witness and a welcome within. Would that passers by would share the the peace we find in prayer when we dropp into a wayside church.10.

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