The Calling Poem by louis rams

The Calling

Rating: 5.0


as I walked down the unlit street
I saw a candle lit in a window.
like a lighthouse, leading and guiding
the ships in the dark of night.
so was this flicker of light.
it brought me to this window in a chapel
and the stained glass of my lord
CHRIST on the cross.
as I looked upon his picture
'a thought did enter my mind'.
why was CHRIST facing out? instead of in
for all the congregation to see.
that's when I realized that he was calling to me.
calling for me to come inside
for I had so much to hide.
as I walked to this chapel, I saw
it had twelve steps to get to the top.
I knew then I could not stop.
each step had the face of one of the apostles.
and each apostle greeting me in a different way
and they all had something to say.
by the time I reached the top of the stairs
I realized that I had no worries or cares.
for each one had cleansed me in such a way
that I knew this was where I had to stay.
I had to follow the LORDS teachings
and to help others find the way
because there is so many who had gone astray.
I entered this chapel, and a choir
of angels all sang on high
the voices piercing the deepest sky.
as I looked towards the pulpit
I saw a figure standing there
beckoning me to come closer.
I saw his arms stretched to his sides
and he said:
this is where I abide
give your body and soul to me
for I am the CHRIST, I will set you free.
I did-I do-I am
I did- give myself to him
I do -his bidding
I am- set free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 03 October 2009

Beautiful and full of strength. Nice focus on guiding and encouragement. Written with good choices of words to produce clear vision. Nice work. DC

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~ Jon London ~ 28 September 2009

The such an amazing calmness you get when reading this poem bro....it a loving piece to share...and I'm sure many more will agree...10++

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Sandra Fowler 27 September 2009

An extraordinary experience. No wonder you wish to pass it on. 10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Kranthi Pothineni 27 September 2009

Your write had created a very pleasant mood to my mind.

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Matt Mooney 27 September 2009

Words that give witness and a welcome within. Would that passers by would share the the peace we find in prayer when we dropp into a wayside church.10.

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