The Clouds Had Freedom Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Clouds Had Freedom

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I wish I could enjoy
More with happiness and joy
The precious moments of past
That awaited my attention very fast

But where is the time?
I feel so bad sometimes
I am after funny race
Wealth needs mad chase

I decided to be away
For few days and stay
In nature’s refuge
The real happiness that was refused

Was I not to myself in real sense?
Why was I remaining so tense?
I could find no answer
I felt like having rainy shower

The clouds had freedom
In vast horizon of sky kingdom
What a happy movement at disposal?
I now realized about good proposal

Some moments to be spent isolation
That builds inseparable relation
A close bond that needs no scrutiny
Sincere prayer with blessings from almighty

* clipping from M.A Rathore’s album

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

Hasmukh Mehta welcome.Iskandar Ys Poet, Sundaram Krishnaswamy, Sharif Jhurry and 2 others like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

Sheila Ann Anderson Is It About Time Time is vague term, it can be measured to be perceived, and believed To be so many a variety, a duration, an interval of different things Our melancholy attitude rings, that with time sadness brings Time can make us feel extremely pressured and weighed down Or like a bird, now light and free with newfound wings For it can bring joy if our attitude allows us to sing Instead of heartache like when the angered bee stings We must hang in there and keep moving forward Not complain because time is what keeps us bored Time sometimes can seem like an unbearable curse So we give up and we rant and we chant that we can’t dance To the magnificent tune of life and take the time to learn Instead all our hopes, our dreams, our bridges burn Yet time is a valuable tool, a wonderful blessing We should use our time wisely and stop all the guessing With its ability to teach us patience and perseverance Go ahead and give time the ultimate clearance In a timely manner, we all can learn to prance So is it about time that we give time a chance? Sheila Ann Anderson copyright 07-21-2013 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

Ravi Anantharaman A really good thought.7 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2022

The clouds had freedom In vast horizon of sky kingdom......loved the poetic expression sir. A beautiful poem......top score!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 December 2013

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