The Cobbler Poem by Rishit Desai

The Cobbler

Rating: 5.0


Life in the city is an awful hustle,
We make no time to look around;
Must complete a task to start anew that second,
Even the comforting bed is now a battleground.

This morning was like all the rest,
Who but cares for the cuckoo's nest;
Heart was just another muscle today,
Didn't vex nor pain for the grieving breast.

Eager to catch the first train out,
A push and a nudge bereft of a bout;
Time is a treasure never found in abundance,
To steal a moment is ever the key essence.

In some such days I did find success,
Found a few seconds and a task to attend;
In front of me was this diligent craftsman,
He laboured while I spoke to my friend in Phnom Penh.

He rubbed and brushed and polished my shoes,
Put in all his effort, made them shine like new;
While he then got busy and his tools did he rearrange,
I lauded his effort with disgustingly small change.

So much did I like his work,
That i went to him on occasions many;
Amazing was his love for my leather,
In sun or snow or the floody weather.

Now that I think, there was never between us a conversation,
Face to face makes me coy, such is our civilization;
Wonder what changes me when spoke unabated on phone,
Whilst he worked with his tools I played with my own.

Some went to him to shine,
Some went to mend a hole;
Gave everyone the stitch they deserved,
Be it leather, wood or simply a rubber sole.

The sun ceased its role long ago,
But never did it bother me;
My work went into the night,
The setting one was never for me to see.

Today was but a little different, Lo! beholden,
Cam to the station this time untrodden;
Sinking sun still shone the sky a golden,
Disembarked the same platform, That which was boustrophedon.

Saw the repairman sitting all alone,
As if waiting for someone whilst his hair windblown;
Packed and ready to go were his many-a-tool,
Couldn't figure out what was holding up his schedule.

Stood and watched him pass his time,
So did I as smoke my face atone(d):
He played with the dog or was it the other,
Who derided the shoeman as if a bone.

The next few seconds left me shell-shocked,
In these few seconds my whole life was mocked;
In these few seconds every knit of my veins unravelled,
Left me still, motionless on this platform so often travelled.

Came this youth I took him for his son,
Sat down in front of the ol' man with his back complete;
Laboured limbs latched around with joy and fun,
Piggy back he rode, Alas! ! ! The Cobbler had no feet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 17 July 2012

Great story of the hustle of life, and the things we miss along the way. Beautiful contrast between a man who repairs shoes and has no feet himself, yet he appears to walk in wisdom and happiness.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

Excellent! A beautifully crafted poem that clearly describes just a part of the City life! This thought provoking and touching write also shows your talent and writing skills! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!

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The Reader 15 July 2012

Goodness heart! What end! ! ! Very impressive with all effects... a narrative poem, a sensational story...carrying the reader's focus -all riveted till the end...........! .

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 July 2012

Just good. fantastic

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Wahab Abdul 15 July 2012

really good poem i like it..

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Savita Tyagi 18 June 2013

Wonderful write! An image that we know so well but don't think much about.

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Indranil Bhaduri 07 November 2012

Great job done! ! Loved this awesome piece.

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Aung Si 24 October 2012

interestingly penned/like it

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Unwritten Soul 03 August 2012

I love the way you bring readers to read this good narrative skill and story..i liked it, but the finished lines were sad and touched, but glow a spirit to readers i guess..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

Piggy back he rode, Alas! ! ! The Cobbler had no feet. a panorama...done well.... a well painted scene of urban sprawl..well written and likeable cheers

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