The Coming Light Poem by Chocolate Bunny

The Coming Light

Rating: 2.7
 


In the darkness so far from your sight
I ran away trying to escape the night
It made no sense where could I run
The only thing that I could do was wait for the sun
But something about this was just not good
Even if you asked me to stay I don't think I should
It's just not right for me to be here
Especially the way you want me near
You ask me to stay telling me it's alright
But if i did, I couldn't face myself in the coming Light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 06 December 2008

Chocolate - Values and character can not be portrayed any stronger than with soft words. Good job - Cheryl

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Emily Oldham 25 October 2008

i love this poem... so ambigous, but not too much... its so gripping and intense... keep writing- you are really talented! Athena *** words will change the world ***

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