For The Guy Beside Me Poem by Chocolate Bunny

For The Guy Beside Me

Rating: 3.4

I don't want to be number two
Just to get next to you
I don't want to have to be on TV
Just for you to notice me
I don't need all the money in the world
to become your girl
I just want to chill and waste time
letting all things unimportant pass me by
I don't care what others say
Only your thoughts get me through the day
But I do wish you'd give me your heart
I can promise you that we'll never be apart
So for the guy sitting next to me
It's up to you, what's it going to be?

Greenwolfe 1962 16 June 2008

I gave this a nine because it was very creative. It was also interesting to read. I was into the writing as well. You presented the piece the right way. It was just plain good. GW62

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rohit sapra 30 June 2008

This poem has a great flow and is written in a unique way. It was nice reading such a nice poem.

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Luis Alvarado 20 December 2008

This is very good and to the point. I hope that guy besides you is paying attention! ! !

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Ershad Mazumder 11 November 2008

To be loved and to love. Which part is great? Very simple and good expression.

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Stacey Watts 01 November 2008

Very well written poem. I know all females can identify with this no matter what age. Great job!

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Shilesha Johnson 24 October 2008

this is a good poem. i like it. i have felt that way at some point in my life and it really reflects how i felt. great job

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Amro Beige 23 October 2008

this poem is awesome it really shows emotions and love you must be profesional

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Chocolate Bunny

Chocolate Bunny

Baltimore, Maryland
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