Explore Poems GO!

This Time

Rating: 3.3

I sit in my room
Waiting to hear that phone call
the one I've been waiting for
the one you promised to make to me
But nothing, not even a letter came

Days and days went by
I never left the phone
I waited for a letter
nothing ever happened

Read More

READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Val Morehouse 01 October 2008

We've all been there. You caught it. Val

0 1 Reply
Thad Wilk 06 June 2008

A delightful read C B! ! Very well executed, hope to many more of your poems in the near future! ! Tanks for sharing! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

0 1 Reply
Duncan Wyllie 06 June 2008

This hits the spot, the trials and frustrations played out throughout this piece till the end, where you finally accepted a place where you could move on I can relate to so much of what you say Love duncan X

0 1 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 06 June 2008

Very well thought out piece, great emotion drips down the page, it really can be difficult persuading our hearts to forget, but i think its more about accepting what has gone, or lost is the healer. nicely penned C.B......10 from me Stay strong best wishes Jon

0 1 Reply