This Time Poem by Chocolate Bunny

This Time

Rating: 3.3

I sit in my room
Waiting to hear that phone call
the one I've been waiting for
the one you promised to make to me
But nothing, not even a letter came

Days and days went by
I never left the phone
I waited for a letter
nothing ever happened

weeks, months went by
I waited for your call
Maybe even a letter
never did I get it
never recieved one sinlge call

But this time
I stopped waiting for you to remember
stopped waiting for you to call
not thinking of your letter
the very thought of you was gone

Val Morehouse 01 October 2008

We've all been there. You caught it. Val

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Thad Wilk 06 June 2008

A delightful read C B! ! Very well executed, hope to many more of your poems in the near future! ! Tanks for sharing! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Duncan Wyllie 06 June 2008

This hits the spot, the trials and frustrations played out throughout this piece till the end, where you finally accepted a place where you could move on I can relate to so much of what you say Love duncan X

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~ Jon London ~ 06 June 2008

Very well thought out piece, great emotion drips down the page, it really can be difficult persuading our hearts to forget, but i think its more about accepting what has gone, or lost is the healer. nicely penned C.B......10 from me Stay strong best wishes Jon

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Chocolate Bunny

Chocolate Bunny

Baltimore, Maryland
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