Friday, July 10, 2009

The Creator Comments

Rating: 5.0

He made the universe with the wave of his hand
then decided to change the plan.
he made this planet of dirt and stone
but it could not be left alone.
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louis rams
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Obed Souza 22 July 2009

A God made man, a man made God, it´s amazing the power of love... Great!

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

brilliant poem...well written theological presentation in poetic craftmanship...to its true in the last stanza.....10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 July 2009

yeah his son would manifest with the blazing glory................a good write..

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~ Jon London ~ 11 July 2009

With the colours of life, a world painted by the greatest artist of them all....slowly fades by the hands of goverments....who aren't artists at all.....now our world slows to a crawl...................Lovely balanced share here my friend.....your faith shines through lovingly in each piece you create my friend.....keep exploring 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 July 2009

Well a nice plot you laid hear. Had a nice read. Good write.

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lovely flow of life itself...with everything given man struggles over nothing...a true balance he has to decipher not with knowledge...love teaches better.....10

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