The Creator Poem by louis rams

The Creator

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He made the universe with the wave of his hand
then decided to change the plan.
he made this planet of dirt and stone
but it could not be left alone.

He needed something to quench his thirst
from the ground water did burst.
he made this planet two thirds water
and put in creatures to complete the order.

He felt all that he created was a great plan.
then he decided to make man.
man was the most difficult challenge
of all his creations
for it had to be of great sensation.

man would live on all the creatures
that he created, in land, air, or sea.
to be able to think, with the brain
that they was given,
and control all life forms that was living.

He decided to give man a heart of gold
and then added a thing called soul.

he gave the heart a two fold purpose
one to live, and the other to feel
all sorts of different sensations.
then he added all the other spices
love, sorrow, jealousy, bitterness and hate.

but the strongest two was LOVE AND FAITH.
now that the heart was complete
he took the soul, and he did treat.
he treated it with all that he had put into
the mind and heart.
this is how we got our start.

now that all this was done
in the future he would give his SON.
His son may have many different names
but he is GOD just the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely flow of life itself...with everything given man struggles over nothing...a true balance he has to decipher not with knowledge...love teaches better.....10

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Obed Souza 22 July 2009

A God made man, a man made God, it´s amazing the power of love... Great!

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

brilliant poem...well written theological presentation in poetic craftmanship...to its true in the last stanza.....10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 July 2009

yeah his son would manifest with the blazing glory................a good write..

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~ Jon London ~ 11 July 2009

With the colours of life, a world painted by the greatest artist of them all....slowly fades by the hands of goverments....who aren't artists at all.....now our world slows to a crawl...................Lovely balanced share here my friend.....your faith shines through lovingly in each piece you create my friend.....keep exploring 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 11 July 2009

Well a nice plot you laid hear. Had a nice read. Good write.

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