You who criticise poetry
From the hearts of writers
Assuming because you
Write too much
That you have right
To be so judgemental
Of their work
Just look at yourself
Sitting on the hill
Down playing God
Then sitting in his seat
And judging
Shame, oh shame, on you
Two faces is too many
Go back to one.
Yes Leah...Sigh... you are right. Thanks for your thoughts.Geoffrey.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Geoffrey, your poems that you share about your thoughts, such as this one are enjoyed always. Meeting with a Critic can sometimes leave one feeling so sad, we all judge, some more outspoken than others.
Judgement can be an easy thing to be guilty off John I fear. Thank you for your wonderful comments my friend. Cheers Geoffrey.