Only now dear one
In my hour of need I call on you,
Call for you, call out to you
Please help me now, right now, I beg
Oh so desperate I am for your help
Here alone in the dark-scared, frightened
-
'Sorry I'm not available.Leave a short
Ten second message I will get back to you'
Ten seconds goes whilst I take a breath
Preparing to speak.
'Texting you with bleeding fingers
Gets me nowhere but more painfully lost
Emailing you@ panic.com
Only comes bouncing back
Oh no, good God!
I have just realised I am about
To be deleted…..!
A very unusual and thought provoking read- congratulations on your Nomination
Geoffrey, such a great poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... big 10+++++
To all that have commented on the above poem I thank you from my heart.All sorts of angles are thought of from all you out there in Poetry land and if opinions are born and discussed over writing then we are all blessed.My cheers and wishes to you all and thanks for reading. Geoffrey.
Captivating for a breath. Also with your title and your Comment All the People Have Gone Then with your change of focus. So clever your words focussing on technology. It is not just the youth. Thank You I have a poem Save Our Children From Technology
Congrats on your poem being chosen as POD'. Well-deserved. I loved the poem! !
So true in modern times. Congrats for being picked up as members POTD.
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautiful poem.Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brave new world with such things in it
Aint that the truth…Cheers Kelly.