Sunday, June 23, 2019

The Dance Of Is-Ness Comments

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The dance is Is-ness

Above the head is cloud,
Above the cloud is vast Sky,
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Prabir Gayen
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Poetic Justice 26 July 2020

Above the head is cloud, Above the cloud is vast Sky, Inside the Mind a deep cloud, Inside the cloud a deep sky, ..! !

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The dance is Is-ness - The dance of life - the dance of existence - the dance of emotions. A sweet poem with a sweet picture. Thank you Prabir

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Anjandev Roy 23 June 2019

The breaking is blooming......... very well written.Thanks for sharing. Anjandev Roy.

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Julia Luber 23 June 2019

I love this poem. I start to see a mind with a cloud in it, and I can see the whole sequence of stages and metaphysics with the rain and the cloud, kind of like a Magritte painting or some other surrealist- clear in its surrealness. Lovely.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 June 2019

GRT PG PG PG AND OF COURSE YOU PG FIRST ONE ON PH AR BUT YOU DO KNOW ME DON'T YE Do thou know me? .. WHY THIS QSAR BUT YOU DO KNOW ME DON'T YE Do thou know me? .. WHY THIS QS MB MY THREE FRIENDS HERE ONE IS YE

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 June 2019

A cute poem with endearing expression! Loved reading it...........................10

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 June 2019

Mind is a debris of clouds and dream reigns, The step of my dream is yet to break, The breaking is blooming, ..../// beautiful poem and beautiful expression

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