The Dawn Of Life Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Dawn Of Life



Li'le doth man know in this world to unwind,
Chasing name and fame's fake gems and jewels,
Knowing well, borrowed shine lasts but brief spells,
Few rest tuned in, to inner voice aligned,
Few care that but truth shines unhindered hue,
Few mind the eyes can't facts from fiction find,
Reasons from rags, good sense from ill-designed,
But man still trusts bare eye that has no clue.
Enough, no use in such shallows to swim,
High time to know, the truth far deeper dwells,
Scratch thine conscience that not but truth tells,
Swirl from depths to stir up crème de la crème.
The day ye wake up be the dawn of life,
O to begin journey unknown births rife.
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Sonnets | 02.12.14 |

Wednesday, August 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2019

High time to know, the truth far deeper dwells, Scratch thine conscience that not but truth tells, Swirl from depths to stir up crème de la crème. The day ye wake up be the dawn of life, O to begin journey unknown births rife........outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on life and journey is brilliantly inscribed. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 August 2019

Thank you for appreciating the poem, which, to some it might sound like proselytizing, dear poet KM.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2019

Reasons from rags! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 August 2019

Thanks to see your feedback after a brief vacation.

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Jane Campion 07 August 2019

A finely tuned write that bare eyes must see.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 August 2019

Thanks dear reader poet, though I'm not sure about 'that bare eyes must see'.

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