The Day Melts Away Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

The Day Melts Away

Rating: 5.0


The strength of the sun
Declines in midafternoon
It's bright light waning
The day slowly melts away
As time races in its track

Tuesday, January 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: day,sun,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 29 January 2018

So beautiful. Such a meaningful drop. Loved it.

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Kostas Lagos 29 January 2018

This is awesome! A 10 is not enough!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 January 2018

Nudershada, such a great poem...10+++

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