The Dream Poem by Susheela Alexiose

The Dream

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Of the many planets in the world
I like Jupiter the brightest of all
For I always dislike the darkness
Which only gives distress and agony

The separation only made my love increase
The love that is a riddle
The distance only made me secluded
From my beloved bright Jupiter

Like divine showers there came
The goddess of love- Venus
She took me away from this world
And kept me safe in the hands of Jupiter

There in Jupiter's mansion
We danced and made merry
As a baby in exultation
And tired after hours, I rested in his lap

But very soon I realised
It was only a dream
Never again did I long to see
My beloved in my dream

But I thank Jupiter for the precious hours
He shared in my life till the dawning
For the love he filled in me
Helped me bloom like a tree

Saturday, October 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 12 November 2018

There in Jupiter's mansion We danced and made merry....you love Jupiter the lover star.......... you write beautifully love scenes

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 October 2018

But I thank Jupiter for the precious hours He shared in my life till the dawning For the love he filled in me Helped me bloom like a tree...love is the essence of your soulllllllll. your craving and description even going to the level of stars to describe your feelings is marvelous.... thank u. tony

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