The Best Place Poem by Susheela Alexiose

The Best Place

Rating: 5.0


You are my music
You are my song
You are my life
Whom I long

Let me wrap my hands
Around your neck
Let my heart hear your beats
As I hug you closely to me
Let the weight of your love
Breakdown all the pain of my heart

The best place I love to be
Is the place where you dwell

Seeing your beauty
I am mesmerized
Hearing you calling me
I am thrilled

Falling in love with you
Is the best thing that has happened to me

Friday, November 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2018

Let me wrap my hands Around your neck Let my heart hear your beats As I hug you closely to me Let the weight of your love Breakdown all the pain of my heart.........so touching and impressive. His love has power to breakdown all pains. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 November 2018

Let the weight of your love Breakdown all the pain of my heart yes truly dear. love alone removes our pain. but it should be pure and sincere love......thanku dear poetess. tony

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Jaya J 03 November 2018

Beautiful

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Cyrus Mathew 03 November 2018

Your poems are like dreams which hang through the branches and fall down

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 November 2018

Susheela, such a lovely write..........10++++++++++++

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 02 November 2018

Best love poem Thanx for sharing

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